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Which is suitable to be more poetic???
a leaf that sheds
a leaf that falls off
grammaticality american-english poetic
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Which is suitable to be more poetic???
a leaf that sheds
a leaf that falls off
grammaticality american-english poetic
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Hi Anagha, welcome to EL&U. Proofreading questions (e.g. "Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. PS a tree sheds leaves but a leaf sheds water :-)
– Chappo
Dec 3 at 11:59
Whichever fits the metre of the poem. "Sheds" is more idiomatic, but that's not the only consideration.
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Dec 3 at 12:57
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a leaf that sheds
a leaf that falls off
grammaticality american-english poetic
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Which is suitable to be more poetic???
a leaf that sheds
a leaf that falls off
grammaticality american-english poetic
grammaticality american-english poetic
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Hi Anagha, welcome to EL&U. Proofreading questions (e.g. "Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. PS a tree sheds leaves but a leaf sheds water :-)
– Chappo
Dec 3 at 11:59
Whichever fits the metre of the poem. "Sheds" is more idiomatic, but that's not the only consideration.
– Hot Licks
Dec 3 at 12:57
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Hi Anagha, welcome to EL&U. Proofreading questions (e.g. "Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. PS a tree sheds leaves but a leaf sheds water :-)
– Chappo
Dec 3 at 11:59
Whichever fits the metre of the poem. "Sheds" is more idiomatic, but that's not the only consideration.
– Hot Licks
Dec 3 at 12:57
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Hi Anagha, welcome to EL&U. Proofreading questions (e.g. "Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. PS a tree sheds leaves but a leaf sheds water :-)
– Chappo
Dec 3 at 11:59
Hi Anagha, welcome to EL&U. Proofreading questions (e.g. "Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. PS a tree sheds leaves but a leaf sheds water :-)
– Chappo
Dec 3 at 11:59
Whichever fits the metre of the poem. "Sheds" is more idiomatic, but that's not the only consideration.
– Hot Licks
Dec 3 at 12:57
Whichever fits the metre of the poem. "Sheds" is more idiomatic, but that's not the only consideration.
– Hot Licks
Dec 3 at 12:57
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If the OP is asking which sentence of theirs is more poetic, I cannot answer. The title of the question is, however, ungrammatical.
leaves shed
leaves fall off (the trees)
But I can illustrate how the term "shed" should/can be used.
Q: What does a leaf shed?
A: Moisture? Clorophyll?
Q: What do trees shed?
A: If the trees are deciduous then the answer is leaves
1 (of a tree or shrub) shedding its leaves annually.
‘sun-loving deciduous trees like aspen’
Q: What do tears shed? A: Saline?
Q: What do eyes shed? A: Tears
shed tears
Weep; cry.
‘You would almost see the palm trees weeping and shedding tears.’
Source: Oxford Dictionaries
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If the OP is asking which sentence of theirs is more poetic, I cannot answer. The title of the question is, however, ungrammatical.
leaves shed
leaves fall off (the trees)
But I can illustrate how the term "shed" should/can be used.
Q: What does a leaf shed?
A: Moisture? Clorophyll?
Q: What do trees shed?
A: If the trees are deciduous then the answer is leaves
1 (of a tree or shrub) shedding its leaves annually.
‘sun-loving deciduous trees like aspen’
Q: What do tears shed? A: Saline?
Q: What do eyes shed? A: Tears
shed tears
Weep; cry.
‘You would almost see the palm trees weeping and shedding tears.’
Source: Oxford Dictionaries
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If the OP is asking which sentence of theirs is more poetic, I cannot answer. The title of the question is, however, ungrammatical.
leaves shed
leaves fall off (the trees)
But I can illustrate how the term "shed" should/can be used.
Q: What does a leaf shed?
A: Moisture? Clorophyll?
Q: What do trees shed?
A: If the trees are deciduous then the answer is leaves
1 (of a tree or shrub) shedding its leaves annually.
‘sun-loving deciduous trees like aspen’
Q: What do tears shed? A: Saline?
Q: What do eyes shed? A: Tears
shed tears
Weep; cry.
‘You would almost see the palm trees weeping and shedding tears.’
Source: Oxford Dictionaries
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up vote
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up vote
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If the OP is asking which sentence of theirs is more poetic, I cannot answer. The title of the question is, however, ungrammatical.
leaves shed
leaves fall off (the trees)
But I can illustrate how the term "shed" should/can be used.
Q: What does a leaf shed?
A: Moisture? Clorophyll?
Q: What do trees shed?
A: If the trees are deciduous then the answer is leaves
1 (of a tree or shrub) shedding its leaves annually.
‘sun-loving deciduous trees like aspen’
Q: What do tears shed? A: Saline?
Q: What do eyes shed? A: Tears
shed tears
Weep; cry.
‘You would almost see the palm trees weeping and shedding tears.’
Source: Oxford Dictionaries
If the OP is asking which sentence of theirs is more poetic, I cannot answer. The title of the question is, however, ungrammatical.
leaves shed
leaves fall off (the trees)
But I can illustrate how the term "shed" should/can be used.
Q: What does a leaf shed?
A: Moisture? Clorophyll?
Q: What do trees shed?
A: If the trees are deciduous then the answer is leaves
1 (of a tree or shrub) shedding its leaves annually.
‘sun-loving deciduous trees like aspen’
Q: What do tears shed? A: Saline?
Q: What do eyes shed? A: Tears
shed tears
Weep; cry.
‘You would almost see the palm trees weeping and shedding tears.’
Source: Oxford Dictionaries
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answered Dec 3 at 12:28
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Hi Anagha, welcome to EL&U. Proofreading questions (e.g. "Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. PS a tree sheds leaves but a leaf sheds water :-)
– Chappo
Dec 3 at 11:59
Whichever fits the metre of the poem. "Sheds" is more idiomatic, but that's not the only consideration.
– Hot Licks
Dec 3 at 12:57