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I am writing to register my interest in your advertised position, for an “ Assistant Accountant.” I am very interested in this opportunity with Sunrise Corporation and believe that my education, and professional experience, would make me a strong candidate for the position. With over six years of experience working in accounts administration, I have developed proficiency in using various software applications; including, MS Word, Excel, Outlook, MYOB and Xero.



I am a proactive, and detailed-oriented worker, who derives a great deal of personal satisfaction from completing all assigned tasks, accurately and efficiently. I have a friendly and helpful attitude, and enjoy providing a professional level of customer service to both external, and internal customers.



I am close to completing my study of the Diploma in Accounting, and am very keen to utilise my skills, in a practical environment.
I enjoy working as part of a well functioning team, and am very keen, to contribute towards the continued success of Sunrise Corporation achieving its goals.









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    You should also look into correct use of apostrophes.

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I am writing to register my interest in your advertised position, for an “ Assistant Accountant.” I am very interested in this opportunity with Sunrise Corporation and believe that my education, and professional experience, would make me a strong candidate for the position. With over six years of experience working in accounts administration, I have developed proficiency in using various software applications; including, MS Word, Excel, Outlook, MYOB and Xero.



I am a proactive, and detailed-oriented worker, who derives a great deal of personal satisfaction from completing all assigned tasks, accurately and efficiently. I have a friendly and helpful attitude, and enjoy providing a professional level of customer service to both external, and internal customers.



I am close to completing my study of the Diploma in Accounting, and am very keen to utilise my skills, in a practical environment.
I enjoy working as part of a well functioning team, and am very keen, to contribute towards the continued success of Sunrise Corporation achieving its goals.









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    You should also look into correct use of apostrophes.

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I am writing to register my interest in your advertised position, for an “ Assistant Accountant.” I am very interested in this opportunity with Sunrise Corporation and believe that my education, and professional experience, would make me a strong candidate for the position. With over six years of experience working in accounts administration, I have developed proficiency in using various software applications; including, MS Word, Excel, Outlook, MYOB and Xero.



I am a proactive, and detailed-oriented worker, who derives a great deal of personal satisfaction from completing all assigned tasks, accurately and efficiently. I have a friendly and helpful attitude, and enjoy providing a professional level of customer service to both external, and internal customers.



I am close to completing my study of the Diploma in Accounting, and am very keen to utilise my skills, in a practical environment.
I enjoy working as part of a well functioning team, and am very keen, to contribute towards the continued success of Sunrise Corporation achieving its goals.









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I am writing to register my interest in your advertised position, for an “ Assistant Accountant.” I am very interested in this opportunity with Sunrise Corporation and believe that my education, and professional experience, would make me a strong candidate for the position. With over six years of experience working in accounts administration, I have developed proficiency in using various software applications; including, MS Word, Excel, Outlook, MYOB and Xero.



I am a proactive, and detailed-oriented worker, who derives a great deal of personal satisfaction from completing all assigned tasks, accurately and efficiently. I have a friendly and helpful attitude, and enjoy providing a professional level of customer service to both external, and internal customers.



I am close to completing my study of the Diploma in Accounting, and am very keen to utilise my skills, in a practical environment.
I enjoy working as part of a well functioning team, and am very keen, to contribute towards the continued success of Sunrise Corporation achieving its goals.







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    You should also look into correct use of apostrophes.

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    You should also look into correct use of apostrophes.

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Since this question is going to come up again..and again with completely different sets of text, the best way to answer the person providing the query is to equip them. Provide an excellent source reference on English grammar.



I would recommend W. Strunk, Jr. & E.B. White's "Elements of Style" - The University of Washington has it in .pdf https://faculty.washington.edu/heagerty/Courses/b572/public/StrunkWhite.pdf



II. Elementary Rules of Useage:




  1. In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last ...............................................3

  2. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas .................... 3

  3. Place a comma before and or but introducing an independent clause .. 4


In two, small pages written in bullet format you get the rules on English commas.



If WSU's free version in .pdf doesn't suit you, buy the newer 4th Edition (1999) for about $8.00 USD Amazon or order it in many Bookstores.





Another excellent source is Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL) https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html (search on "commas") - - Quick. Simple.





The last is my favorite. H.R. Fowler, J.E. Aaron, and J. Okoomian's "The Little, Brown Handbook" Pearson Longman Printing. The newer editions have printed book with links to online resources. Pearson provides the Instructor version in .pdf format at this link (free): http://www.pearsoncustom.com/de/instructor/Instructors_manual.pdf



Simplest is best, and the first of these three takes less than 5 minutes. You simply apply them to your text. You'll be right every time.






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    Since this question is going to come up again..and again with completely different sets of text, the best way to answer the person providing the query is to equip them. Provide an excellent source reference on English grammar.



    I would recommend W. Strunk, Jr. & E.B. White's "Elements of Style" - The University of Washington has it in .pdf https://faculty.washington.edu/heagerty/Courses/b572/public/StrunkWhite.pdf



    II. Elementary Rules of Useage:




    1. In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last ...............................................3

    2. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas .................... 3

    3. Place a comma before and or but introducing an independent clause .. 4


    In two, small pages written in bullet format you get the rules on English commas.



    If WSU's free version in .pdf doesn't suit you, buy the newer 4th Edition (1999) for about $8.00 USD Amazon or order it in many Bookstores.





    Another excellent source is Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL) https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html (search on "commas") - - Quick. Simple.





    The last is my favorite. H.R. Fowler, J.E. Aaron, and J. Okoomian's "The Little, Brown Handbook" Pearson Longman Printing. The newer editions have printed book with links to online resources. Pearson provides the Instructor version in .pdf format at this link (free): http://www.pearsoncustom.com/de/instructor/Instructors_manual.pdf



    Simplest is best, and the first of these three takes less than 5 minutes. You simply apply them to your text. You'll be right every time.






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      Since this question is going to come up again..and again with completely different sets of text, the best way to answer the person providing the query is to equip them. Provide an excellent source reference on English grammar.



      I would recommend W. Strunk, Jr. & E.B. White's "Elements of Style" - The University of Washington has it in .pdf https://faculty.washington.edu/heagerty/Courses/b572/public/StrunkWhite.pdf



      II. Elementary Rules of Useage:




      1. In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last ...............................................3

      2. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas .................... 3

      3. Place a comma before and or but introducing an independent clause .. 4


      In two, small pages written in bullet format you get the rules on English commas.



      If WSU's free version in .pdf doesn't suit you, buy the newer 4th Edition (1999) for about $8.00 USD Amazon or order it in many Bookstores.





      Another excellent source is Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL) https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html (search on "commas") - - Quick. Simple.





      The last is my favorite. H.R. Fowler, J.E. Aaron, and J. Okoomian's "The Little, Brown Handbook" Pearson Longman Printing. The newer editions have printed book with links to online resources. Pearson provides the Instructor version in .pdf format at this link (free): http://www.pearsoncustom.com/de/instructor/Instructors_manual.pdf



      Simplest is best, and the first of these three takes less than 5 minutes. You simply apply them to your text. You'll be right every time.






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        Since this question is going to come up again..and again with completely different sets of text, the best way to answer the person providing the query is to equip them. Provide an excellent source reference on English grammar.



        I would recommend W. Strunk, Jr. & E.B. White's "Elements of Style" - The University of Washington has it in .pdf https://faculty.washington.edu/heagerty/Courses/b572/public/StrunkWhite.pdf



        II. Elementary Rules of Useage:




        1. In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last ...............................................3

        2. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas .................... 3

        3. Place a comma before and or but introducing an independent clause .. 4


        In two, small pages written in bullet format you get the rules on English commas.



        If WSU's free version in .pdf doesn't suit you, buy the newer 4th Edition (1999) for about $8.00 USD Amazon or order it in many Bookstores.





        Another excellent source is Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL) https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html (search on "commas") - - Quick. Simple.





        The last is my favorite. H.R. Fowler, J.E. Aaron, and J. Okoomian's "The Little, Brown Handbook" Pearson Longman Printing. The newer editions have printed book with links to online resources. Pearson provides the Instructor version in .pdf format at this link (free): http://www.pearsoncustom.com/de/instructor/Instructors_manual.pdf



        Simplest is best, and the first of these three takes less than 5 minutes. You simply apply them to your text. You'll be right every time.






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        Since this question is going to come up again..and again with completely different sets of text, the best way to answer the person providing the query is to equip them. Provide an excellent source reference on English grammar.



        I would recommend W. Strunk, Jr. & E.B. White's "Elements of Style" - The University of Washington has it in .pdf https://faculty.washington.edu/heagerty/Courses/b572/public/StrunkWhite.pdf



        II. Elementary Rules of Useage:




        1. In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last ...............................................3

        2. Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas .................... 3

        3. Place a comma before and or but introducing an independent clause .. 4


        In two, small pages written in bullet format you get the rules on English commas.



        If WSU's free version in .pdf doesn't suit you, buy the newer 4th Edition (1999) for about $8.00 USD Amazon or order it in many Bookstores.





        Another excellent source is Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL) https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html (search on "commas") - - Quick. Simple.





        The last is my favorite. H.R. Fowler, J.E. Aaron, and J. Okoomian's "The Little, Brown Handbook" Pearson Longman Printing. The newer editions have printed book with links to online resources. Pearson provides the Instructor version in .pdf format at this link (free): http://www.pearsoncustom.com/de/instructor/Instructors_manual.pdf



        Simplest is best, and the first of these three takes less than 5 minutes. You simply apply them to your text. You'll be right every time.







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