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If the sentence below sounds natural:

"It is necessary to accelerate the implementation of the norms of treaties to the national legislation that frames the fight against terrorism and cybercrime by states which are parties to those treaties."

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      "It is necessary to accelerate the implementation of the norms of treaties to the national legislation that frames the fight against terrorism and cybercrime by states which are parties to those treaties."

      Thanks!






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