Meaningful sentence structure with several clauses [on hold]

.everyoneloves__top-leaderboard:empty,.everyoneloves__mid-leaderboard:empty{ margin-bottom:0;
}

up vote
0
down vote

favorite

If the sentence below sounds natural:

"It is necessary to accelerate the implementation of the norms of treaties to the national legislation that frames the fight against terrorism and cybercrime by states which are parties to those treaties."

Thanks!

edited Nov 30 at 15:55

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

New contributor

put on hold as off-topic by Jason Bassford, Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, J. Taylor, jimm101 23 hours ago

This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:

"Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, jimm101

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.

add a comment |

up vote
0
down vote

favorite

edited Nov 30 at 15:55

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

New contributor

put on hold as off-topic by Jason Bassford, Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, J. Taylor, jimm101 23 hours ago

This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:

"Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, jimm101

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.

add a comment |

up vote
0
down vote

favorite

edited Nov 30 at 15:55

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

New contributor

sentence-structure

edited Nov 30 at 15:55

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

New contributor

edited Nov 30 at 15:55

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

New contributor

edited Nov 30 at 15:55

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

New contributor

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

asked Nov 30 at 14:00

Otash

New contributor

Otash is a new contributor to this site. Take care in asking for clarification, commenting, and answering.
Check out our Code of Conduct.

put on hold as off-topic by Jason Bassford, Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, J. Taylor, jimm101 23 hours ago

This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:

"Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, jimm101

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.

put on hold as off-topic by Jason Bassford, Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, J. Taylor, jimm101 23 hours ago

This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:

"Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Phil Sweet, Mark Beadles, jimm101

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.

add a comment |

active

oldest

votes

This page is only for reference, If you need detailed information, please check here

搜尋此網誌

Argthtjtr