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guys! I am writing a CV for my first interview and I am not sure it's ok, so I really need someone who can check it for me in everything you can. Thank you so much!
1.Objects: I am a final year student in Business English of University of finance and marketing (UFM), where my study has encompassed a range of business-related fields such as Banking, Marketing, Tourism, and role play for a meeting, negotiation, presentation, business cultures, and other soft skills in English. I'm excited about joining your team with Workplace Experience Programme (WEP) in HSBC Bank (Ho Chi Minh city), which will provide opportunities for my further development and progression. I would love to work for an Internships for 3 months.
Education: Sept 2015-present: Business English student
University of finance and marketing( UFM)
3.WORK EXPERIENCE
March 2016-Jun 2017: Part-timer at Takashimaya mall
Main responsibilities:
- Make and explain membership cards to customers.
- Introduce, consult promotion programs and answer customers' questions.
- Assist to control the number of vouchers and gifts each program is given.
Recognition and Gains:
- Being able to communicate effectively with customers and handle challenging situations.
Aug 2017-Present: Work as a tutor for children and high school students
Achievements and skills gained:
- Design an effective lesson plan for teaching.
- Consider the way of teaching depending on the student abilities in the whole process.
- Improve English Communication Skill.
3.ACTIVITIES
2016 - present Volunteer works
- Join to organize volunteer works for children in Búng charity house and some churches, Binh Duong province.
- Work well with teamwork skill.
4.CERTIFICATIONS
2018 Microsoft Office Specialist (MOS)
5.SKILLS
Soft skills Very good at communicating with customers
Solving problem and teamwork skills.
Work well in the high-pressure environment.
Creative thinking skills
Computer Familiarity with computer skills.
Word, Excel, Powerpoint
6.INTERESTS
Travel: I backpacked Cambodia and some Vietnam destinations.
Sport: Swim, traveling.
7.STRENGTHS
I have strongly responsibilities in jobs I got and collaborate effectively with business partners and co-workers. I am dedicated, detail oriented and recover quickly from setbacks.
8.WEEKNESSES
I am lacking experience for this direct job but I am sure am always willing to learn and determine attitude towards new things and new jobs.
I like to make sure all my work has to be perfect, therefore, I tend to spend too much time checking it. However, I've come to a good balance by setting up a system to ensure everything is done the first time correctly and guarantee to complete the rest work on time.
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guys! I am writing a CV for my first interview and I am not sure it's ok, so I really need someone who can check it for me in everything you can. Thank you so much!
1.Objects: I am a final year student in Business English of University of finance and marketing (UFM), where my study has encompassed a range of business-related fields such as Banking, Marketing, Tourism, and role play for a meeting, negotiation, presentation, business cultures, and other soft skills in English. I'm excited about joining your team with Workplace Experience Programme (WEP) in HSBC Bank (Ho Chi Minh city), which will provide opportunities for my further development and progression. I would love to work for an Internships for 3 months.
Education: Sept 2015-present: Business English student
University of finance and marketing( UFM)
3.WORK EXPERIENCE
March 2016-Jun 2017: Part-timer at Takashimaya mall
Main responsibilities:
- Make and explain membership cards to customers.
- Introduce, consult promotion programs and answer customers' questions.
- Assist to control the number of vouchers and gifts each program is given.
Recognition and Gains:
- Being able to communicate effectively with customers and handle challenging situations.
Aug 2017-Present: Work as a tutor for children and high school students
Achievements and skills gained:
- Design an effective lesson plan for teaching.
- Consider the way of teaching depending on the student abilities in the whole process.
- Improve English Communication Skill.
3.ACTIVITIES
2016 - present Volunteer works
- Join to organize volunteer works for children in Búng charity house and some churches, Binh Duong province.
- Work well with teamwork skill.
4.CERTIFICATIONS
2018 Microsoft Office Specialist (MOS)
5.SKILLS
Soft skills Very good at communicating with customers
Solving problem and teamwork skills.
Work well in the high-pressure environment.
Creative thinking skills
Computer Familiarity with computer skills.
Word, Excel, Powerpoint
6.INTERESTS
Travel: I backpacked Cambodia and some Vietnam destinations.
Sport: Swim, traveling.
7.STRENGTHS
I have strongly responsibilities in jobs I got and collaborate effectively with business partners and co-workers. I am dedicated, detail oriented and recover quickly from setbacks.
8.WEEKNESSES
I am lacking experience for this direct job but I am sure am always willing to learn and determine attitude towards new things and new jobs.
I like to make sure all my work has to be perfect, therefore, I tend to spend too much time checking it. However, I've come to a good balance by setting up a system to ensure everything is done the first time correctly and guarantee to complete the rest work on time.
sentence-structure
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put on hold as off-topic by Mari-Lou A, Sven Yargs, sumelic, Jason Bassford, k1eran 2 days ago
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Mari-Lou A, Sven Yargs, sumelic, Jason Bassford, k1eran
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
Hello, Hoa Mỹ Nguyễn, and thanks for your interest in English Language & Usage. Unfortunately, this site is not a proofreading or editing service, and questions that request such service are explicitly off-topic here. I hope that you can find a suitable site where you can obtain a useful review of your CV, but this site is not the place.
– Sven Yargs
2 days ago
There are many grammatical errors that any person who is proficient in English will identify easily. You don't need native speakers and strangers from the Internet to proofread your CV. Find anyone who has at least an IELTS 6.5 certificate or a friend who has studied English and always got good exam results. TIP Never list your weaknesses in a CV, it is unnecessary. If you do get to the next stage, the interview, it is one of the questions you may be asked.
– Mari-Lou A
2 days ago
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guys! I am writing a CV for my first interview and I am not sure it's ok, so I really need someone who can check it for me in everything you can. Thank you so much!
1.Objects: I am a final year student in Business English of University of finance and marketing (UFM), where my study has encompassed a range of business-related fields such as Banking, Marketing, Tourism, and role play for a meeting, negotiation, presentation, business cultures, and other soft skills in English. I'm excited about joining your team with Workplace Experience Programme (WEP) in HSBC Bank (Ho Chi Minh city), which will provide opportunities for my further development and progression. I would love to work for an Internships for 3 months.
Education: Sept 2015-present: Business English student
University of finance and marketing( UFM)
3.WORK EXPERIENCE
March 2016-Jun 2017: Part-timer at Takashimaya mall
Main responsibilities:
- Make and explain membership cards to customers.
- Introduce, consult promotion programs and answer customers' questions.
- Assist to control the number of vouchers and gifts each program is given.
Recognition and Gains:
- Being able to communicate effectively with customers and handle challenging situations.
Aug 2017-Present: Work as a tutor for children and high school students
Achievements and skills gained:
- Design an effective lesson plan for teaching.
- Consider the way of teaching depending on the student abilities in the whole process.
- Improve English Communication Skill.
3.ACTIVITIES
2016 - present Volunteer works
- Join to organize volunteer works for children in Búng charity house and some churches, Binh Duong province.
- Work well with teamwork skill.
4.CERTIFICATIONS
2018 Microsoft Office Specialist (MOS)
5.SKILLS
Soft skills Very good at communicating with customers
Solving problem and teamwork skills.
Work well in the high-pressure environment.
Creative thinking skills
Computer Familiarity with computer skills.
Word, Excel, Powerpoint
6.INTERESTS
Travel: I backpacked Cambodia and some Vietnam destinations.
Sport: Swim, traveling.
7.STRENGTHS
I have strongly responsibilities in jobs I got and collaborate effectively with business partners and co-workers. I am dedicated, detail oriented and recover quickly from setbacks.
8.WEEKNESSES
I am lacking experience for this direct job but I am sure am always willing to learn and determine attitude towards new things and new jobs.
I like to make sure all my work has to be perfect, therefore, I tend to spend too much time checking it. However, I've come to a good balance by setting up a system to ensure everything is done the first time correctly and guarantee to complete the rest work on time.
sentence-structure
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guys! I am writing a CV for my first interview and I am not sure it's ok, so I really need someone who can check it for me in everything you can. Thank you so much!
1.Objects: I am a final year student in Business English of University of finance and marketing (UFM), where my study has encompassed a range of business-related fields such as Banking, Marketing, Tourism, and role play for a meeting, negotiation, presentation, business cultures, and other soft skills in English. I'm excited about joining your team with Workplace Experience Programme (WEP) in HSBC Bank (Ho Chi Minh city), which will provide opportunities for my further development and progression. I would love to work for an Internships for 3 months.
Education: Sept 2015-present: Business English student
University of finance and marketing( UFM)
3.WORK EXPERIENCE
March 2016-Jun 2017: Part-timer at Takashimaya mall
Main responsibilities:
- Make and explain membership cards to customers.
- Introduce, consult promotion programs and answer customers' questions.
- Assist to control the number of vouchers and gifts each program is given.
Recognition and Gains:
- Being able to communicate effectively with customers and handle challenging situations.
Aug 2017-Present: Work as a tutor for children and high school students
Achievements and skills gained:
- Design an effective lesson plan for teaching.
- Consider the way of teaching depending on the student abilities in the whole process.
- Improve English Communication Skill.
3.ACTIVITIES
2016 - present Volunteer works
- Join to organize volunteer works for children in Búng charity house and some churches, Binh Duong province.
- Work well with teamwork skill.
4.CERTIFICATIONS
2018 Microsoft Office Specialist (MOS)
5.SKILLS
Soft skills Very good at communicating with customers
Solving problem and teamwork skills.
Work well in the high-pressure environment.
Creative thinking skills
Computer Familiarity with computer skills.
Word, Excel, Powerpoint
6.INTERESTS
Travel: I backpacked Cambodia and some Vietnam destinations.
Sport: Swim, traveling.
7.STRENGTHS
I have strongly responsibilities in jobs I got and collaborate effectively with business partners and co-workers. I am dedicated, detail oriented and recover quickly from setbacks.
8.WEEKNESSES
I am lacking experience for this direct job but I am sure am always willing to learn and determine attitude towards new things and new jobs.
I like to make sure all my work has to be perfect, therefore, I tend to spend too much time checking it. However, I've come to a good balance by setting up a system to ensure everything is done the first time correctly and guarantee to complete the rest work on time.
sentence-structure
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put on hold as off-topic by Mari-Lou A, Sven Yargs, sumelic, Jason Bassford, k1eran 2 days ago
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Mari-Lou A, Sven Yargs, sumelic, Jason Bassford, k1eran
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
put on hold as off-topic by Mari-Lou A, Sven Yargs, sumelic, Jason Bassford, k1eran 2 days ago
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Mari-Lou A, Sven Yargs, sumelic, Jason Bassford, k1eran
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
Hello, Hoa Mỹ Nguyễn, and thanks for your interest in English Language & Usage. Unfortunately, this site is not a proofreading or editing service, and questions that request such service are explicitly off-topic here. I hope that you can find a suitable site where you can obtain a useful review of your CV, but this site is not the place.
– Sven Yargs
2 days ago
There are many grammatical errors that any person who is proficient in English will identify easily. You don't need native speakers and strangers from the Internet to proofread your CV. Find anyone who has at least an IELTS 6.5 certificate or a friend who has studied English and always got good exam results. TIP Never list your weaknesses in a CV, it is unnecessary. If you do get to the next stage, the interview, it is one of the questions you may be asked.
– Mari-Lou A
2 days ago
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Hello, Hoa Mỹ Nguyễn, and thanks for your interest in English Language & Usage. Unfortunately, this site is not a proofreading or editing service, and questions that request such service are explicitly off-topic here. I hope that you can find a suitable site where you can obtain a useful review of your CV, but this site is not the place.
– Sven Yargs
2 days ago
There are many grammatical errors that any person who is proficient in English will identify easily. You don't need native speakers and strangers from the Internet to proofread your CV. Find anyone who has at least an IELTS 6.5 certificate or a friend who has studied English and always got good exam results. TIP Never list your weaknesses in a CV, it is unnecessary. If you do get to the next stage, the interview, it is one of the questions you may be asked.
– Mari-Lou A
2 days ago
Hello, Hoa Mỹ Nguyễn, and thanks for your interest in English Language & Usage. Unfortunately, this site is not a proofreading or editing service, and questions that request such service are explicitly off-topic here. I hope that you can find a suitable site where you can obtain a useful review of your CV, but this site is not the place.
– Sven Yargs
2 days ago
Hello, Hoa Mỹ Nguyễn, and thanks for your interest in English Language & Usage. Unfortunately, this site is not a proofreading or editing service, and questions that request such service are explicitly off-topic here. I hope that you can find a suitable site where you can obtain a useful review of your CV, but this site is not the place.
– Sven Yargs
2 days ago
There are many grammatical errors that any person who is proficient in English will identify easily. You don't need native speakers and strangers from the Internet to proofread your CV. Find anyone who has at least an IELTS 6.5 certificate or a friend who has studied English and always got good exam results. TIP Never list your weaknesses in a CV, it is unnecessary. If you do get to the next stage, the interview, it is one of the questions you may be asked.
– Mari-Lou A
2 days ago
There are many grammatical errors that any person who is proficient in English will identify easily. You don't need native speakers and strangers from the Internet to proofread your CV. Find anyone who has at least an IELTS 6.5 certificate or a friend who has studied English and always got good exam results. TIP Never list your weaknesses in a CV, it is unnecessary. If you do get to the next stage, the interview, it is one of the questions you may be asked.
– Mari-Lou A
2 days ago
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Hello, Hoa Mỹ Nguyễn, and thanks for your interest in English Language & Usage. Unfortunately, this site is not a proofreading or editing service, and questions that request such service are explicitly off-topic here. I hope that you can find a suitable site where you can obtain a useful review of your CV, but this site is not the place.
– Sven Yargs
2 days ago
There are many grammatical errors that any person who is proficient in English will identify easily. You don't need native speakers and strangers from the Internet to proofread your CV. Find anyone who has at least an IELTS 6.5 certificate or a friend who has studied English and always got good exam results. TIP Never list your weaknesses in a CV, it is unnecessary. If you do get to the next stage, the interview, it is one of the questions you may be asked.
– Mari-Lou A
2 days ago