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I want to make important message in my website, but I'm not sure that it is both grammatically and syntactically correct. Here is the message:



"Please, make sure that your question and attachments are correct, because after paying you want be able to edit them."



Best Regards










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put on hold as off-topic by Andrew Leach 2 days ago


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  • I would suggest "...once you have paid, you won't be able to edit them."

    – Andrew Leach
    2 days ago













  • Yes, "... want be able to change them" is grammatically incorrect but suggests that you will have the desire to change them and implies that this will be possible. I know it's probably a typo for won't as @AndrewLeach suggests but it does reverse the meaning.

    – BoldBen
    2 days ago


















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I want to make important message in my website, but I'm not sure that it is both grammatically and syntactically correct. Here is the message:



"Please, make sure that your question and attachments are correct, because after paying you want be able to edit them."



Best Regards










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put on hold as off-topic by Andrew Leach 2 days ago


This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:


  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Andrew Leach

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.














  • I would suggest "...once you have paid, you won't be able to edit them."

    – Andrew Leach
    2 days ago













  • Yes, "... want be able to change them" is grammatically incorrect but suggests that you will have the desire to change them and implies that this will be possible. I know it's probably a typo for won't as @AndrewLeach suggests but it does reverse the meaning.

    – BoldBen
    2 days ago
















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I want to make important message in my website, but I'm not sure that it is both grammatically and syntactically correct. Here is the message:



"Please, make sure that your question and attachments are correct, because after paying you want be able to edit them."



Best Regards










share|improve this question







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I want to make important message in my website, but I'm not sure that it is both grammatically and syntactically correct. Here is the message:



"Please, make sure that your question and attachments are correct, because after paying you want be able to edit them."



Best Regards







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put on hold as off-topic by Andrew Leach 2 days ago


This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:


  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Andrew Leach

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.




put on hold as off-topic by Andrew Leach 2 days ago


This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:


  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Andrew Leach

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.













  • I would suggest "...once you have paid, you won't be able to edit them."

    – Andrew Leach
    2 days ago













  • Yes, "... want be able to change them" is grammatically incorrect but suggests that you will have the desire to change them and implies that this will be possible. I know it's probably a typo for won't as @AndrewLeach suggests but it does reverse the meaning.

    – BoldBen
    2 days ago





















  • I would suggest "...once you have paid, you won't be able to edit them."

    – Andrew Leach
    2 days ago













  • Yes, "... want be able to change them" is grammatically incorrect but suggests that you will have the desire to change them and implies that this will be possible. I know it's probably a typo for won't as @AndrewLeach suggests but it does reverse the meaning.

    – BoldBen
    2 days ago



















I would suggest "...once you have paid, you won't be able to edit them."

– Andrew Leach
2 days ago







I would suggest "...once you have paid, you won't be able to edit them."

– Andrew Leach
2 days ago















Yes, "... want be able to change them" is grammatically incorrect but suggests that you will have the desire to change them and implies that this will be possible. I know it's probably a typo for won't as @AndrewLeach suggests but it does reverse the meaning.

– BoldBen
2 days ago







Yes, "... want be able to change them" is grammatically incorrect but suggests that you will have the desire to change them and implies that this will be possible. I know it's probably a typo for won't as @AndrewLeach suggests but it does reverse the meaning.

– BoldBen
2 days ago












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