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I need help with |Thus| in the following line
"I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus to never stop learning."



I used this sentence in my portfolio and I have a feeling that it's not correct or natural, I might be wrong though.





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I wouldn't want someone to either misunderstand that statement or even feel unease due to the fact that it holds both meanings.



How about: "I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus I never stop learning". Or "I believe in starting where others stopped, so I never stop learning". Are these two sentences grammatically correct ?



Also I was concerned that "thus" could refer to "past" conclusions. What do you think?










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  • You can't believe to never stop learning. It would be better to say: I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus in never stopping to learn.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago












  • @JasonBassford "never stopping to learn" can be easily taken to mean the opposite of what is intended (think "never stopping to smell the roses"); I would not recommend that phrasing.
    – Mark Beadles
    2 days ago






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    @MarkBeadles Fair point, I did not think of the other interpretation. Still, however it's phrased, the portion after thus should be grammatical with I believe in. Perhaps and thus never stopping my learning.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago

















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I need help with |Thus| in the following line
"I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus to never stop learning."



I used this sentence in my portfolio and I have a feeling that it's not correct or natural, I might be wrong though.





Edit:



I wouldn't want someone to either misunderstand that statement or even feel unease due to the fact that it holds both meanings.



How about: "I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus I never stop learning". Or "I believe in starting where others stopped, so I never stop learning". Are these two sentences grammatically correct ?



Also I was concerned that "thus" could refer to "past" conclusions. What do you think?










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put on hold as off-topic by AndyT, Jason Bassford, jimm101, Dan Bron, Scott yesterday


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  • You can't believe to never stop learning. It would be better to say: I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus in never stopping to learn.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago












  • @JasonBassford "never stopping to learn" can be easily taken to mean the opposite of what is intended (think "never stopping to smell the roses"); I would not recommend that phrasing.
    – Mark Beadles
    2 days ago






  • 1




    @MarkBeadles Fair point, I did not think of the other interpretation. Still, however it's phrased, the portion after thus should be grammatical with I believe in. Perhaps and thus never stopping my learning.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago













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I need help with |Thus| in the following line
"I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus to never stop learning."



I used this sentence in my portfolio and I have a feeling that it's not correct or natural, I might be wrong though.





Edit:



I wouldn't want someone to either misunderstand that statement or even feel unease due to the fact that it holds both meanings.



How about: "I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus I never stop learning". Or "I believe in starting where others stopped, so I never stop learning". Are these two sentences grammatically correct ?



Also I was concerned that "thus" could refer to "past" conclusions. What do you think?










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I need help with |Thus| in the following line
"I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus to never stop learning."



I used this sentence in my portfolio and I have a feeling that it's not correct or natural, I might be wrong though.





Edit:



I wouldn't want someone to either misunderstand that statement or even feel unease due to the fact that it holds both meanings.



How about: "I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus I never stop learning". Or "I believe in starting where others stopped, so I never stop learning". Are these two sentences grammatically correct ?



Also I was concerned that "thus" could refer to "past" conclusions. What do you think?







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put on hold as off-topic by AndyT, Jason Bassford, jimm101, Dan Bron, Scott yesterday


This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:


  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Jason Bassford, jimm101, Dan Bron

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put on hold as off-topic by AndyT, Jason Bassford, jimm101, Dan Bron, Scott yesterday


This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:


  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Jason Bassford, jimm101, Dan Bron

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.












  • You can't believe to never stop learning. It would be better to say: I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus in never stopping to learn.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago












  • @JasonBassford "never stopping to learn" can be easily taken to mean the opposite of what is intended (think "never stopping to smell the roses"); I would not recommend that phrasing.
    – Mark Beadles
    2 days ago






  • 1




    @MarkBeadles Fair point, I did not think of the other interpretation. Still, however it's phrased, the portion after thus should be grammatical with I believe in. Perhaps and thus never stopping my learning.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago


















  • You can't believe to never stop learning. It would be better to say: I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus in never stopping to learn.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago












  • @JasonBassford "never stopping to learn" can be easily taken to mean the opposite of what is intended (think "never stopping to smell the roses"); I would not recommend that phrasing.
    – Mark Beadles
    2 days ago






  • 1




    @MarkBeadles Fair point, I did not think of the other interpretation. Still, however it's phrased, the portion after thus should be grammatical with I believe in. Perhaps and thus never stopping my learning.
    – Jason Bassford
    2 days ago
















You can't believe to never stop learning. It would be better to say: I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus in never stopping to learn.
– Jason Bassford
2 days ago






You can't believe to never stop learning. It would be better to say: I believe in starting where others stopped, and thus in never stopping to learn.
– Jason Bassford
2 days ago














@JasonBassford "never stopping to learn" can be easily taken to mean the opposite of what is intended (think "never stopping to smell the roses"); I would not recommend that phrasing.
– Mark Beadles
2 days ago




@JasonBassford "never stopping to learn" can be easily taken to mean the opposite of what is intended (think "never stopping to smell the roses"); I would not recommend that phrasing.
– Mark Beadles
2 days ago




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@MarkBeadles Fair point, I did not think of the other interpretation. Still, however it's phrased, the portion after thus should be grammatical with I believe in. Perhaps and thus never stopping my learning.
– Jason Bassford
2 days ago




@MarkBeadles Fair point, I did not think of the other interpretation. Still, however it's phrased, the portion after thus should be grammatical with I believe in. Perhaps and thus never stopping my learning.
– Jason Bassford
2 days ago















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