How to change the sentence and keep the actual meaning I want to convey?
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I had a sentence which I am thinking to write for my paper but I want to convey the right idea with less amount of words due to words restriction. I have a below sentence as -
I designed and optimized "< something which I did> " for "< where the things will be used >" in terms of "< parameters>".
Is there any other to write this sentence so that I can convey the idea in a much better way and using fewer words?
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I had a sentence which I am thinking to write for my paper but I want to convey the right idea with less amount of words due to words restriction. I have a below sentence as -
I designed and optimized "< something which I did> " for "< where the things will be used >" in terms of "< parameters>".
Is there any other to write this sentence so that I can convey the idea in a much better way and using fewer words?
sentence sentence-structure
asked Dec 8 at 0:08
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That's about style, choice and homework. Since you're here, consider writing the paper in your own language, then finding a translator… more important than it seems because any Answer to the "I designed…'< parameters>'" Question will leave you suffering from all the problems in "I had a sentence…I have a below sentence as -" The meaning of that was fairly clear but if you write a paper using grammar, semantics or vocabulary of that quality, I suggest you'll wish you'd used a good translator instead of working your own backside off.
– Robbie Goodwin
Dec 8 at 1:07
You will have a hard time reducing the length of your sentence while retaining the same semantic content. Of course, we could probably make a few minor suggestions if you gave us some realistic content for the phrases you "parameterized", but as it stands there's no way to do anything.
– Hot Licks
Dec 8 at 3:23
I've flagged this question for closure as off-topic ("proofreading"). Rahulkumar, our Help Centre provides further guidance on How to Ask, and you should also take the Tour. Note also that for general advice on writing, our other site Writing is worth visiting. :-)
– Chappo
Dec 8 at 4:05
I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it asks for writing advice. I also find it unclear.
– Scott
Dec 8 at 4:40
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I had a sentence which I am thinking to write for my paper but I want to convey the right idea with less amount of words due to words restriction. I have a below sentence as -
I designed and optimized "< something which I did> " for "< where the things will be used >" in terms of "< parameters>".
Is there any other to write this sentence so that I can convey the idea in a much better way and using fewer words?
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asked Dec 8 at 0:08
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I had a sentence which I am thinking to write for my paper but I want to convey the right idea with less amount of words due to words restriction. I have a below sentence as -
I designed and optimized "< something which I did> " for "< where the things will be used >" in terms of "< parameters>".
Is there any other to write this sentence so that I can convey the idea in a much better way and using fewer words?
sentence sentence-structure
sentence sentence-structure
asked Dec 8 at 0:08
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That's about style, choice and homework. Since you're here, consider writing the paper in your own language, then finding a translator… more important than it seems because any Answer to the "I designed…'< parameters>'" Question will leave you suffering from all the problems in "I had a sentence…I have a below sentence as -" The meaning of that was fairly clear but if you write a paper using grammar, semantics or vocabulary of that quality, I suggest you'll wish you'd used a good translator instead of working your own backside off.
– Robbie Goodwin
Dec 8 at 1:07
You will have a hard time reducing the length of your sentence while retaining the same semantic content. Of course, we could probably make a few minor suggestions if you gave us some realistic content for the phrases you "parameterized", but as it stands there's no way to do anything.
– Hot Licks
Dec 8 at 3:23
I've flagged this question for closure as off-topic ("proofreading"). Rahulkumar, our Help Centre provides further guidance on How to Ask, and you should also take the Tour. Note also that for general advice on writing, our other site Writing is worth visiting. :-)
– Chappo
Dec 8 at 4:05
I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it asks for writing advice. I also find it unclear.
– Scott
Dec 8 at 4:40
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That's about style, choice and homework. Since you're here, consider writing the paper in your own language, then finding a translator… more important than it seems because any Answer to the "I designed…'< parameters>'" Question will leave you suffering from all the problems in "I had a sentence…I have a below sentence as -" The meaning of that was fairly clear but if you write a paper using grammar, semantics or vocabulary of that quality, I suggest you'll wish you'd used a good translator instead of working your own backside off.
– Robbie Goodwin
Dec 8 at 1:07
You will have a hard time reducing the length of your sentence while retaining the same semantic content. Of course, we could probably make a few minor suggestions if you gave us some realistic content for the phrases you "parameterized", but as it stands there's no way to do anything.
– Hot Licks
Dec 8 at 3:23
I've flagged this question for closure as off-topic ("proofreading"). Rahulkumar, our Help Centre provides further guidance on How to Ask, and you should also take the Tour. Note also that for general advice on writing, our other site Writing is worth visiting. :-)
– Chappo
Dec 8 at 4:05
I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it asks for writing advice. I also find it unclear.
– Scott
Dec 8 at 4:40
That's about style, choice and homework. Since you're here, consider writing the paper in your own language, then finding a translator… more important than it seems because any Answer to the "I designed…'< parameters>'" Question will leave you suffering from all the problems in "I had a sentence…I have a below sentence as -" The meaning of that was fairly clear but if you write a paper using grammar, semantics or vocabulary of that quality, I suggest you'll wish you'd used a good translator instead of working your own backside off.
– Robbie Goodwin
Dec 8 at 1:07
That's about style, choice and homework. Since you're here, consider writing the paper in your own language, then finding a translator… more important than it seems because any Answer to the "I designed…'< parameters>'" Question will leave you suffering from all the problems in "I had a sentence…I have a below sentence as -" The meaning of that was fairly clear but if you write a paper using grammar, semantics or vocabulary of that quality, I suggest you'll wish you'd used a good translator instead of working your own backside off.
– Robbie Goodwin
Dec 8 at 1:07
You will have a hard time reducing the length of your sentence while retaining the same semantic content. Of course, we could probably make a few minor suggestions if you gave us some realistic content for the phrases you "parameterized", but as it stands there's no way to do anything.
– Hot Licks
Dec 8 at 3:23
You will have a hard time reducing the length of your sentence while retaining the same semantic content. Of course, we could probably make a few minor suggestions if you gave us some realistic content for the phrases you "parameterized", but as it stands there's no way to do anything.
– Hot Licks
Dec 8 at 3:23
I've flagged this question for closure as off-topic ("proofreading"). Rahulkumar, our Help Centre provides further guidance on How to Ask, and you should also take the Tour. Note also that for general advice on writing, our other site Writing is worth visiting. :-)
– Chappo
Dec 8 at 4:05
I've flagged this question for closure as off-topic ("proofreading"). Rahulkumar, our Help Centre provides further guidance on How to Ask, and you should also take the Tour. Note also that for general advice on writing, our other site Writing is worth visiting. :-)
– Chappo
Dec 8 at 4:05
I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it asks for writing advice. I also find it unclear.
– Scott
Dec 8 at 4:40
I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it asks for writing advice. I also find it unclear.
– Scott
Dec 8 at 4:40
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That's about style, choice and homework. Since you're here, consider writing the paper in your own language, then finding a translator… more important than it seems because any Answer to the "I designed…'< parameters>'" Question will leave you suffering from all the problems in "I had a sentence…I have a below sentence as -" The meaning of that was fairly clear but if you write a paper using grammar, semantics or vocabulary of that quality, I suggest you'll wish you'd used a good translator instead of working your own backside off.
– Robbie Goodwin
Dec 8 at 1:07
You will have a hard time reducing the length of your sentence while retaining the same semantic content. Of course, we could probably make a few minor suggestions if you gave us some realistic content for the phrases you "parameterized", but as it stands there's no way to do anything.
– Hot Licks
Dec 8 at 3:23
I've flagged this question for closure as off-topic ("proofreading"). Rahulkumar, our Help Centre provides further guidance on How to Ask, and you should also take the Tour. Note also that for general advice on writing, our other site Writing is worth visiting. :-)
– Chappo
Dec 8 at 4:05
I'm voting to close this question as off-topic because it asks for writing advice. I also find it unclear.
– Scott
Dec 8 at 4:40