How to write 'right after graduation' in biography [on hold]
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
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asked Dec 13 at 22:38
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
grammar word-choice
asked Dec 13 at 22:38
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put on hold as off-topic by Kristina Lopez, choster, jimm101, Jason Bassford, Let's stop villifying Iran Dec 14 at 3:37
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
grammar word-choice
asked Dec 13 at 22:38
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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".
Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?
grammar word-choice
grammar word-choice
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put on hold as off-topic by Kristina Lopez, choster, jimm101, Jason Bassford, Let's stop villifying Iran Dec 14 at 3:37
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
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put on hold as off-topic by Kristina Lopez, choster, jimm101, Jason Bassford, Let's stop villifying Iran Dec 14 at 3:37
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Kristina Lopez, Jason Bassford
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26
What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44
What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26
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What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44
'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44
"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55
I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56
@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26