How to write 'right after graduation' in biography [on hold]











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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".



Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?






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  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    Dec 13 at 22:55












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:56










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 23:26















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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".



Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?






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put on hold as off-topic by Kristina Lopez, choster, jimm101, Jason Bassford, Let's stop villifying Iran Dec 14 at 3:37


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  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    Dec 13 at 22:55












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:56










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 23:26













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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".



Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?






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I am writing a biography and I want to write a sentence that is "Right after graduation, I joined the institute of X to work as an academic researcher".



Can you help me in re-writing this sentence in a better way, especially the first part?






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put on hold as off-topic by Kristina Lopez, choster, jimm101, Jason Bassford, Let's stop villifying Iran Dec 14 at 3:37


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put on hold as off-topic by Kristina Lopez, choster, jimm101, Jason Bassford, Let's stop villifying Iran Dec 14 at 3:37


This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:


  • "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Kristina Lopez, Jason Bassford

If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.












  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    Dec 13 at 22:55












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:56










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 23:26


















  • What do you think is wrong with it?
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • 'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
    – Anas
    Dec 13 at 22:44










  • "joined the institute" is worse...
    – Weather Vane
    Dec 13 at 22:55












  • I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 22:56










  • @WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
    – StoneyB
    Dec 13 at 23:26
















What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44




What do you think is wrong with it?
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:44












'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44




'Right after graduation' doesn't look good in the biography. Can you suggest better words?
– Anas
Dec 13 at 22:44












"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55






"joined the institute" is worse...
– Weather Vane
Dec 13 at 22:55














I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56




I would have no objection to right after in even the most formal register. But I'm just a professional writer, not one those "experts" (in steering students into bureaucracies?) who would tut-tut anything that might be mistaken as actual English-as-she-is-spoken.
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 22:56












@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26




@WeatherVane I assumed that OP meant a name, the "Institute of X".
– StoneyB
Dec 13 at 23:26















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