I don't like the comma before which in this sentence, am I wrong?
I believe the comma before which is required by grammatical rule. Although, when I read it, I feel that it causes an unnatural pause for the reader. Am I wrong?
In July 2018, the company published a final report on Phase I, which identified that limitations to the resolution of the ultrasonic examination method could prevent the examiner from determining whether indications found parallel to the weld during examination are cracks in the tank or a feature of the weld.
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I believe the comma before which is required by grammatical rule. Although, when I read it, I feel that it causes an unnatural pause for the reader. Am I wrong?
In July 2018, the company published a final report on Phase I, which identified that limitations to the resolution of the ultrasonic examination method could prevent the examiner from determining whether indications found parallel to the weld during examination are cracks in the tank or a feature of the weld.
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[...]published a Phase I final report which identified etc. That way is better.
– Lambie
10 hours ago
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The general rule is that a non-restrictive clause - there is only one final report on Phase I - begins with "which" and is preceded by a comma. If your ear tells you to break that rule, chances are there's a better way to write the sentence, e.g., that you have subordinated the wrong thing in your subordinate clause. I suspect that recasting the sentence to use "...,which was published in July, 2018," would solve your problem.
– remarkl
8 hours ago
If you are writing according to US style guides, there should be a comma before which in this type of construction. If you don't like the comma, replace which with that (making sure that you are using a restrictive clause). In UK English style guides, however, this does not apply. (In UK English, which can be used restrictively in this construction without a comma.)
– Jason Bassford
8 hours ago
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I believe the comma before which is required by grammatical rule. Although, when I read it, I feel that it causes an unnatural pause for the reader. Am I wrong?
In July 2018, the company published a final report on Phase I, which identified that limitations to the resolution of the ultrasonic examination method could prevent the examiner from determining whether indications found parallel to the weld during examination are cracks in the tank or a feature of the weld.
commas
asked 10 hours ago
BrettABrettA
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I believe the comma before which is required by grammatical rule. Although, when I read it, I feel that it causes an unnatural pause for the reader. Am I wrong?
In July 2018, the company published a final report on Phase I, which identified that limitations to the resolution of the ultrasonic examination method could prevent the examiner from determining whether indications found parallel to the weld during examination are cracks in the tank or a feature of the weld.
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[...]published a Phase I final report which identified etc. That way is better.
– Lambie
10 hours ago
1
The general rule is that a non-restrictive clause - there is only one final report on Phase I - begins with "which" and is preceded by a comma. If your ear tells you to break that rule, chances are there's a better way to write the sentence, e.g., that you have subordinated the wrong thing in your subordinate clause. I suspect that recasting the sentence to use "...,which was published in July, 2018," would solve your problem.
– remarkl
8 hours ago
If you are writing according to US style guides, there should be a comma before which in this type of construction. If you don't like the comma, replace which with that (making sure that you are using a restrictive clause). In UK English style guides, however, this does not apply. (In UK English, which can be used restrictively in this construction without a comma.)
– Jason Bassford
8 hours ago
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[...]published a Phase I final report which identified etc. That way is better.
– Lambie
10 hours ago
1
The general rule is that a non-restrictive clause - there is only one final report on Phase I - begins with "which" and is preceded by a comma. If your ear tells you to break that rule, chances are there's a better way to write the sentence, e.g., that you have subordinated the wrong thing in your subordinate clause. I suspect that recasting the sentence to use "...,which was published in July, 2018," would solve your problem.
– remarkl
8 hours ago
If you are writing according to US style guides, there should be a comma before which in this type of construction. If you don't like the comma, replace which with that (making sure that you are using a restrictive clause). In UK English style guides, however, this does not apply. (In UK English, which can be used restrictively in this construction without a comma.)
– Jason Bassford
8 hours ago
1
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[...]published a Phase I final report which identified etc. That way is better.
– Lambie
10 hours ago
[...]published a Phase I final report which identified etc. That way is better.
– Lambie
10 hours ago
1
1
The general rule is that a non-restrictive clause - there is only one final report on Phase I - begins with "which" and is preceded by a comma. If your ear tells you to break that rule, chances are there's a better way to write the sentence, e.g., that you have subordinated the wrong thing in your subordinate clause. I suspect that recasting the sentence to use "...,which was published in July, 2018," would solve your problem.
– remarkl
8 hours ago
The general rule is that a non-restrictive clause - there is only one final report on Phase I - begins with "which" and is preceded by a comma. If your ear tells you to break that rule, chances are there's a better way to write the sentence, e.g., that you have subordinated the wrong thing in your subordinate clause. I suspect that recasting the sentence to use "...,which was published in July, 2018," would solve your problem.
– remarkl
8 hours ago
If you are writing according to US style guides, there should be a comma before which in this type of construction. If you don't like the comma, replace which with that (making sure that you are using a restrictive clause). In UK English style guides, however, this does not apply. (In UK English, which can be used restrictively in this construction without a comma.)
– Jason Bassford
8 hours ago
If you are writing according to US style guides, there should be a comma before which in this type of construction. If you don't like the comma, replace which with that (making sure that you are using a restrictive clause). In UK English style guides, however, this does not apply. (In UK English, which can be used restrictively in this construction without a comma.)
– Jason Bassford
8 hours ago
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[...]published a Phase I final report which identified etc. That way is better.
– Lambie
10 hours ago
1
The general rule is that a non-restrictive clause - there is only one final report on Phase I - begins with "which" and is preceded by a comma. If your ear tells you to break that rule, chances are there's a better way to write the sentence, e.g., that you have subordinated the wrong thing in your subordinate clause. I suspect that recasting the sentence to use "...,which was published in July, 2018," would solve your problem.
– remarkl
8 hours ago
If you are writing according to US style guides, there should be a comma before which in this type of construction. If you don't like the comma, replace which with that (making sure that you are using a restrictive clause). In UK English style guides, however, this does not apply. (In UK English, which can be used restrictively in this construction without a comma.)
– Jason Bassford
8 hours ago