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I'm torn how to position the two instances of "it" in this question. I believe that both sentences are acceptable and convey the same meaning, but I'm not sure which is more likely to be confusing, ambiguous, or mis-understood.



Does one stand out as the better title for a Stack Exchange question? Is there a standard rule at play here that I should know about?




A: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve it or melt it?



B: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize it redissolve or melt it?




I suppose I could also get rid of one instance all together as well:




C: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve or melt it?











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    I find all three options perfectly clear and natural, with a slight preference for B. In natural conversation, I think I’d probably use it three times: “Does heating to decrystallise it redissolve it or melt it?”. (Note the double L and the prefix in decrystallise – I’ve never heard of un-crystallising honey, but decrystallising honey is a reasonably common phrase.)

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  • @JanusBahsJacquet thanks for the reassurance, and for a new word for me; decrystallise

    – uhoh
    yesterday






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    @JanusBahsJacquet I might even use four instances of the pronoun: Does heating it to un-crystalize it redissolve it or melt it?

    – Jason Bassford
    yesterday


















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I'm torn how to position the two instances of "it" in this question. I believe that both sentences are acceptable and convey the same meaning, but I'm not sure which is more likely to be confusing, ambiguous, or mis-understood.



Does one stand out as the better title for a Stack Exchange question? Is there a standard rule at play here that I should know about?




A: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve it or melt it?



B: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize it redissolve or melt it?




I suppose I could also get rid of one instance all together as well:




C: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve or melt it?











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  • I may need some help with proper tagging.

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    yesterday






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    I find all three options perfectly clear and natural, with a slight preference for B. In natural conversation, I think I’d probably use it three times: “Does heating to decrystallise it redissolve it or melt it?”. (Note the double L and the prefix in decrystallise – I’ve never heard of un-crystallising honey, but decrystallising honey is a reasonably common phrase.)

    – Janus Bahs Jacquet
    yesterday











  • @JanusBahsJacquet thanks for the reassurance, and for a new word for me; decrystallise

    – uhoh
    yesterday






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    @JanusBahsJacquet I might even use four instances of the pronoun: Does heating it to un-crystalize it redissolve it or melt it?

    – Jason Bassford
    yesterday
















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I'm torn how to position the two instances of "it" in this question. I believe that both sentences are acceptable and convey the same meaning, but I'm not sure which is more likely to be confusing, ambiguous, or mis-understood.



Does one stand out as the better title for a Stack Exchange question? Is there a standard rule at play here that I should know about?




A: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve it or melt it?



B: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize it redissolve or melt it?




I suppose I could also get rid of one instance all together as well:




C: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve or melt it?











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I'm torn how to position the two instances of "it" in this question. I believe that both sentences are acceptable and convey the same meaning, but I'm not sure which is more likely to be confusing, ambiguous, or mis-understood.



Does one stand out as the better title for a Stack Exchange question? Is there a standard rule at play here that I should know about?




A: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve it or melt it?



B: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize it redissolve or melt it?




I suppose I could also get rid of one instance all together as well:




C: Is honey really a supersaturated solution? Does heating to un-crystalize redissolve or melt it?








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    I find all three options perfectly clear and natural, with a slight preference for B. In natural conversation, I think I’d probably use it three times: “Does heating to decrystallise it redissolve it or melt it?”. (Note the double L and the prefix in decrystallise – I’ve never heard of un-crystallising honey, but decrystallising honey is a reasonably common phrase.)

    – Janus Bahs Jacquet
    yesterday











  • @JanusBahsJacquet thanks for the reassurance, and for a new word for me; decrystallise

    – uhoh
    yesterday






  • 1





    @JanusBahsJacquet I might even use four instances of the pronoun: Does heating it to un-crystalize it redissolve it or melt it?

    – Jason Bassford
    yesterday





















  • I may need some help with proper tagging.

    – uhoh
    yesterday






  • 2





    I find all three options perfectly clear and natural, with a slight preference for B. In natural conversation, I think I’d probably use it three times: “Does heating to decrystallise it redissolve it or melt it?”. (Note the double L and the prefix in decrystallise – I’ve never heard of un-crystallising honey, but decrystallising honey is a reasonably common phrase.)

    – Janus Bahs Jacquet
    yesterday











  • @JanusBahsJacquet thanks for the reassurance, and for a new word for me; decrystallise

    – uhoh
    yesterday






  • 1





    @JanusBahsJacquet I might even use four instances of the pronoun: Does heating it to un-crystalize it redissolve it or melt it?

    – Jason Bassford
    yesterday



















I may need some help with proper tagging.

– uhoh
yesterday





I may need some help with proper tagging.

– uhoh
yesterday




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I find all three options perfectly clear and natural, with a slight preference for B. In natural conversation, I think I’d probably use it three times: “Does heating to decrystallise it redissolve it or melt it?”. (Note the double L and the prefix in decrystallise – I’ve never heard of un-crystallising honey, but decrystallising honey is a reasonably common phrase.)

– Janus Bahs Jacquet
yesterday





I find all three options perfectly clear and natural, with a slight preference for B. In natural conversation, I think I’d probably use it three times: “Does heating to decrystallise it redissolve it or melt it?”. (Note the double L and the prefix in decrystallise – I’ve never heard of un-crystallising honey, but decrystallising honey is a reasonably common phrase.)

– Janus Bahs Jacquet
yesterday













@JanusBahsJacquet thanks for the reassurance, and for a new word for me; decrystallise

– uhoh
yesterday





@JanusBahsJacquet thanks for the reassurance, and for a new word for me; decrystallise

– uhoh
yesterday




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@JanusBahsJacquet I might even use four instances of the pronoun: Does heating it to un-crystalize it redissolve it or melt it?

– Jason Bassford
yesterday







@JanusBahsJacquet I might even use four instances of the pronoun: Does heating it to un-crystalize it redissolve it or melt it?

– Jason Bassford
yesterday












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