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I'm a first time poster, so please let me know if I am posting in the wrong place! I am trying to break down the sentence structure of this sentence. Specifically, how commas are used in the following sentence-



When Annemarie flailed, sleeping, I was the one who always shook her until she sat up, sheet-tangled, still half-caught in her dream.



This is what I have so far -



When Annemarie flailed - subordinate adverb clause

Sleeping - ???

I was the one who always shook her - independent clause

until she sat up - subordinate adverb clause

sheet-tangled - subordinate adverb clause modifying the "until" clause????

still caught in her sleep - ????



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    I'm a first time poster, so please let me know if I am posting in the wrong place! I am trying to break down the sentence structure of this sentence. Specifically, how commas are used in the following sentence-



    When Annemarie flailed, sleeping, I was the one who always shook her until she sat up, sheet-tangled, still half-caught in her dream.



    This is what I have so far -



    When Annemarie flailed - subordinate adverb clause

    Sleeping - ???

    I was the one who always shook her - independent clause

    until she sat up - subordinate adverb clause

    sheet-tangled - subordinate adverb clause modifying the "until" clause????

    still caught in her sleep - ????



    Any help would be appreciated! This is from R.O. Kwon's short shory Helping










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      I'm a first time poster, so please let me know if I am posting in the wrong place! I am trying to break down the sentence structure of this sentence. Specifically, how commas are used in the following sentence-



      When Annemarie flailed, sleeping, I was the one who always shook her until she sat up, sheet-tangled, still half-caught in her dream.



      This is what I have so far -



      When Annemarie flailed - subordinate adverb clause

      Sleeping - ???

      I was the one who always shook her - independent clause

      until she sat up - subordinate adverb clause

      sheet-tangled - subordinate adverb clause modifying the "until" clause????

      still caught in her sleep - ????



      Any help would be appreciated! This is from R.O. Kwon's short shory Helping










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      I'm a first time poster, so please let me know if I am posting in the wrong place! I am trying to break down the sentence structure of this sentence. Specifically, how commas are used in the following sentence-



      When Annemarie flailed, sleeping, I was the one who always shook her until she sat up, sheet-tangled, still half-caught in her dream.



      This is what I have so far -



      When Annemarie flailed - subordinate adverb clause

      Sleeping - ???

      I was the one who always shook her - independent clause

      until she sat up - subordinate adverb clause

      sheet-tangled - subordinate adverb clause modifying the "until" clause????

      still caught in her sleep - ????



      Any help would be appreciated! This is from R.O. Kwon's short shory Helping







      grammar sentence-structure clauses






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