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This is where the pack-down stage begins, for any resources that was delivered to the festival by suppliers and or contractors.
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Any sentence in English can be rewritten several different ways. It depends on what style you're using, what tone you wish to convey, how it fits in to the rest of the text, etc.
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put on hold as off-topic by Janus Bahs Jacquet, Jason Bassford, Hot Licks, Dan Bron, Andrew Leach♦ Dec 1 at 18:54
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Janus Bahs Jacquet, Jason Bassford, Hot Licks, Dan Bron, Andrew Leach
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
put on hold as off-topic by Janus Bahs Jacquet, Jason Bassford, Hot Licks, Dan Bron, Andrew Leach♦ Dec 1 at 18:54
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – Janus Bahs Jacquet, Jason Bassford, Hot Licks, Dan Bron, Andrew Leach
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
Any sentence in English can be rewritten several different ways. It depends on what style you're using, what tone you wish to convey, how it fits in to the rest of the text, etc.
– Hot Licks
Dec 1 at 18:47
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Any sentence in English can be rewritten several different ways. It depends on what style you're using, what tone you wish to convey, how it fits in to the rest of the text, etc.
– Hot Licks
Dec 1 at 18:47
Any sentence in English can be rewritten several different ways. It depends on what style you're using, what tone you wish to convey, how it fits in to the rest of the text, etc.
– Hot Licks
Dec 1 at 18:47
Any sentence in English can be rewritten several different ways. It depends on what style you're using, what tone you wish to convey, how it fits in to the rest of the text, etc.
– Hot Licks
Dec 1 at 18:47
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Any sentence in English can be rewritten several different ways. It depends on what style you're using, what tone you wish to convey, how it fits in to the rest of the text, etc.
– Hot Licks
Dec 1 at 18:47