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As the bells ring and the sky is torn by a thundering storm. Eleanor is , to no surprise , thrown into dismay once again at the thought of the waste that which she was born to - the unfair life she was forced to live, the loneliness, but now it was no more as she climbs the tower of redemption to her savior, to take control, to crush herself once more, to watch it end in her own hands . The clock strikes at a fundamental moment when the sky cracks and the stars bleed, this was the end of space and time, of life and death, and her suffering. With a fire once so bright she can only scream in desperation as it is washed away and with a sudden rush of excitement she jumps carrying the past to the pit of destruction.
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As the bells ring and the sky is torn by a thundering storm. Eleanor is , to no surprise , thrown into dismay once again at the thought of the waste that which she was born to - the unfair life she was forced to live, the loneliness, but now it was no more as she climbs the tower of redemption to her savior, to take control, to crush herself once more, to watch it end in her own hands . The clock strikes at a fundamental moment when the sky cracks and the stars bleed, this was the end of space and time, of life and death, and her suffering. With a fire once so bright she can only scream in desperation as it is washed away and with a sudden rush of excitement she jumps carrying the past to the pit of destruction.
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put on hold as off-topic by Rory Alsop, Lawrence, Davo, Laurel, Jason Bassford 7 hours ago
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As the bells ring and the sky is torn by a thundering storm. Eleanor is , to no surprise , thrown into dismay once again at the thought of the waste that which she was born to - the unfair life she was forced to live, the loneliness, but now it was no more as she climbs the tower of redemption to her savior, to take control, to crush herself once more, to watch it end in her own hands . The clock strikes at a fundamental moment when the sky cracks and the stars bleed, this was the end of space and time, of life and death, and her suffering. With a fire once so bright she can only scream in desperation as it is washed away and with a sudden rush of excitement she jumps carrying the past to the pit of destruction.
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As the bells ring and the sky is torn by a thundering storm. Eleanor is , to no surprise , thrown into dismay once again at the thought of the waste that which she was born to - the unfair life she was forced to live, the loneliness, but now it was no more as she climbs the tower of redemption to her savior, to take control, to crush herself once more, to watch it end in her own hands . The clock strikes at a fundamental moment when the sky cracks and the stars bleed, this was the end of space and time, of life and death, and her suffering. With a fire once so bright she can only scream in desperation as it is washed away and with a sudden rush of excitement she jumps carrying the past to the pit of destruction.
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put on hold as off-topic by Rory Alsop, Lawrence, Davo, Laurel, Jason Bassford 7 hours ago
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I can't see a question here. Are you asking us to proofread the quote? That would be off topic.
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